
Now for a rundown of the major things I think are wrong with it.
The main character is meant to be Tom Lasker. He is the only person mentioned in the cover
blurb. Tom starts the story and finds the first alien artefact all in the first chapter.
Then slowly fades into oblivion. The real protagonist, Max Collingwood, of the story isn't
mentioned until chapter two. This is the first indicator of the structurlessness of the book.
Next, when the main character does finally show up he goes into interminably long and tedious
details about WWII combat aircraft. By the end of the book I felt I'd be able to build and fly
one of the bloody things. and to top off all this tedium is the fact that the planes have
nothing what-so-ever to do with anything else in the book. The book is about the discovery of
two alien artefacts the first of which is a yacht. There are no details given about normal
yachts in the book. Is this because Jack only knows about WWII planes?
The second focus of this book is the sociological impact of the discovery of the alien artefacts
and my next bone of contention. The book follows the movie trend of being designed for people
with an attention span of no more than five minutes. It is full of little ten page snippets
which bear no relation to each other or the main characters and events of the book. Each
snippet starts with an annoying four page potted bio of the main character in the snippet.
Once this irrelevant side-track reaches it's end the character and events are never seen or
heard of again.
The point of these snippets is to show the impact of the alien artefacts on different sections
of society. Half of Jack's snippets don't seem to be a logical extrapolation of the events and
their impact. They are unconvincing as the result of the discovery of the alien artefacts.
The final annoying thing is the gratuitous use of real people, (Sagan, Benford, Le Guin Hawking,
etc.) as characters in what is otherwise complete fabrication. It smacks of nepotism. How many
famous friends can I persuade to be in my novel to lift it out of the gutter. This is of course
assuming Jack actually asked these people if they would mind appearing in his novel.
Because of all this I couldn't give it more than two stars and was sorely tempted to give it
one.
Hmm. Is there anything nice I can say about this book. The central idea of the alien artefact
and why it was found where it was found, is good. Some of the descriptions in and around the
alien artefact is good as well. The general standard of writing is competent, though tending
to be dull. That's really the best I can say about it.